My Learning this week

This week our teachers told us to wright about the A&P show.This is how far I got.

    DA BEAKFAST DAY AT SCHOOL

All of a sudden I Woke and had Bwekfast.I had some nutri grain it was some yum Bwekfast. Then I went to put some clothes

after I put some clothes on I got ready to go to school. So I gave my mum a hug and left

It took me 5 mins to get to school.

My reading about Christchurch

               Painting the town

Knowledge

1.people who did art in the city are trying to make it look better.

2.Creativity can lift people's spirits

3.People inspire other people

4.art helps people

5.creativity can help people think

Comprehension

my word wall

Application

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Analysis

Something I would change is that I would change is that the text there would be more adjectives  

Synthesis

Evaluation

I think that this text needs illustrations so that it can become a very popular text.

Also so it can be more famas.

And that it can make people become more happy  

Screen cast :D

Click the link for a video:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzUA_l9sTpTdRTZKS1A2RmJqV0k/view

The stuff that I found hard is that took a long time to make it be awesome